Thy Eyes, The World’s Autumns in Entirety
- December 03, 2022
- by Nur Imroatun Sholihat
source: farmanddairy.com |
Walked through the alley of deciduous trees
A soul's empty stare ahead froze my feet
That coppery gleam in thou--was it bonfire or fallen maple leaf
Someone’s gaze so dull yet blinding
Those sorrowful pools were an eternal maze
Thy eyes, the world’s autumns in entirety
Shall I look away from thy brown pearls
A pair of ice lumps
of an expressionless snowman
On this lengthen frosty night
But thy eyes, the crescendo wail I can’t escape from
Thou howled for help in silence
Immeasurable depth of misery I was scared of
As if a smile was once there then faded forever
The leaves fell as my heart fell
Was it me or was the season overdramatic?
'Tis I
Did all autumns act in theatrical?
Did I
Someone’s gaze so dim yet dazzling
A perpetual labyrinth I involuntarily stepped into
Might be I unreasonably longed for autumns
Thy eyes, the world’s autumns in entirety
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P.S:
1. Very much inspired by my sentimental melancholic-yet-consoling arrival in Australia when it was autumn. It was intriguing that something is both sad and comforting. I tried to personify that season into someone that has eyes containing the whole autumn seasons of the world. We can't help but fall for that season as if we fall for him. I also utilize autumn’s synonym “fall” to strengthen the emotions. Heavily influenced by Shakespeare’s Sonnet writing style and diction (did you notice the archaic words?) but of course, it was just my attempt. There is no way my writing could come close to Shakespeare’s quality.
2. I must say that I had so much fun writing this part:
"Was it me or was the season overdramatic?
'Tis I
Did all autumns act in theatrical?
Did I"
*'Tis: It is (archaic)
I wrote it on purpose as "did I" instead of "I did"
to rhyme "'tis I" while at the same time making it sound like I questioned myself
as well. It is I who is overdramatic. It is I who acted in
theatrical. Don't blame the beautiful innocent autumn :)
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